Read the full story here Web Link posted Wednesday, January 4, 2012, 10:55 AM
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Filling bellies, and stockings at CSA
Original post made on Jan 4, 2012
Read the full story here Web Link posted Wednesday, January 4, 2012, 10:55 AM
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Posted by Stephan
a resident of Rex Manor
on Jan 6, 2012 at 9:15 pm
a resident of Rex Manor
on Jan 6, 2012 at 9:15 pm
Blue-pencil remark: The comma in the headline is grammatically unbalanced.
A pair of em dashes would set off the phrase "and bellies" even better.
Posted by Stephan
a resident of Rex Manor
on Jan 6, 2012 at 9:20 pm
a resident of Rex Manor
on Jan 6, 2012 at 9:20 pm
Red-faced erratum: I meant "and bellies.! (Guess I don't get the job!)
Posted by Stephan
a resident of Rex Manor
on Jan 6, 2012 at 9:27 pm
a resident of Rex Manor
on Jan 6, 2012 at 9:27 pm
No, I meant "and stockings" (although it would have made more sense making the customary filling of bellies parenthetical, or set off by commas or dashes). OK, no more commenting by iPod.
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